This is my peer assessment for my double page spread. I did this by asking my class mates to look at my double page spread and give me some feedback on what they like and what I can improve. I also did this to theirs in order to help them improve and to give me some inspiration which I can incorporate into my own.
By doing this, I found out what my target audience would like to see on the page and what aspects they think I could use to improve or features hey think i can include. For instance after looking over all of the comments I was given I concluded that I should fill up more space on the page a pull quote and make certain text larger to fill gaps, making the audience feel s if they are getting more for their money and appeal to them more. I will also consider making the heading bolder to allow it to stand out more on the page.

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